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Doctor Who - The Krotons by Terrance
Dicks
Published: November 1985
Edition
read:
Target first, 1985
Coolest
Cover:
Andrew Skilleter’s "just the monster" approach, although I’m curious as
to why the hexagons stop three-quarters of the way down.
Purple
Prose:
"The Krotons never had any worries about stating the obvious. Indeed
their whole conversation consisted of a series of such statements."
(p.95) Very nicely put...
Crimes
Against
Literature:
"Somehow, her outstanding beauty made it hard to believe that she was
among the most gifted of her generation of students". (p.8) Terrance
Dicks striking a blow for male chauvinism...
The
TARDIS
materialises
with..."a
strange, wheezing, groaning sound"
...and
dematerialises
with ...
"a faint, wheezing, groaning sound".
Childhood
Recollections:
As with ‘The Invasion’, I think I had a hardback of this at a fairly
early stage so may never have read the paperback.
Ramblings:
You might think that after the ambitious re-tellings of Doctor Who’s
past represented by Donald Cotton’s ‘Myth Makers’ and Ian Marter’s
‘Invasion’ that a Terrance Dicks adaptation of a story which had been
repeated only four years before its novelisation might seem weak by
comparison. And in certain lights, it’s true that Robert Holmes’s Who
career is a case of third time lucky, however by the same token the two
main criticisms levelled at the televised story tend to be with the
realisation of the Krotons themselves and with the supporting
performances. The novelisation is therefore an opportunity for Dicks to do
the job he’d done so well with previous Robert Holmes scripts- to bring
out the strengths and intentions of the original story without the
necessary compromises of production for television.
Regardless of how much one believes the stories about
‘The Krotons’ and its apparent origin as a single play, there are some
good ideas at work here. The idea of a society being shaped by unseen
alien invaders to serve their requirements has distinct potential and
feels as if it belongs in a more profound work of science-fiction. Where
Holmes’s scripts become slightly unstuck and really feel like a first
attempt at writing for the series comes with the supporting cast, who
aren’t particularly strong or differentiated characters and rely on an
internal squabble to generate some additional drama, and the Krotons
themselves- Holmes clearly hadn’t yet learned to write for monsters, so
it’s unsurprising that Dicks should include the aside quoted above given
that the Krotons as written are the Sybil Fawltys of the universe,
bellowing the plainly obvious at each other. The ideas suit the printed
page and do lift the story up above Dicks’s less inspired adaptations, and
Dicks’s usual faithful style works best when describing the Second Doctor
and his companions- there’s a clear warmth when the regulars are being
described which Dicks communicates very well.
Unfortunately the down side of the Dicks approach is
that at least some of the weaknesses come through as well as the
strengths. Yes, the story is better without unwieldy Krotons swaying
around in skirts and Selris stumbling over his lines as if he’d only just
been passed the script, but in many (unsurprising) ways the story feels
like a first submission- textbook Doctor Who, in fact. There’s a
promising central idea, exciting new monsters, an oppressed native
population, enough plot strands to keep three regulars busy and exteriors
which can be done in a gravel quarry, however the whole is in the end less
than the sum of its parts and held together largely by the performances of
Troughton, Hines and Padbury- and that can’t translate to the printed
page. The number of blank pages out of the numbered 121 is disappointing,
and although in some ways Terrance Dicks’s style is refreshing after the
embellishments of Cotton and Marter, the story itself isn’t disctinctive
enough in the right areas for this to be one of Dicks’s very best.
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