At the time of his death in 2001, Douglas Adams was a
successful and popular author with a dedicated fan base, due in large part
to The Hitch-Hiker’s Guide to the Galaxy in all its various forms.
By contrast, the Dirk Gently novels- Dirk Gently’s Holistic Detective
Agency, The Long Dark Teatime of the Soul and the abortive Salmon
of Doubt occupy a rather more tangential and apocryphal place in his
output. M.J. Simpson’s biography of Adams refers to The Long Dark
Teatime of the Soul three times, and two of those references are to
Adams undertaking publicity and signing tours rather than the novel
itself. The Dirk Gently novels do, however, bridge the gap between the
first four Hitch-Hiker books and Mostly Harmless, Adams’s last
published complete novel, and also represent an attempt to create
something different from the universe on which Adams had expended much of
his creative energies since the late 1970’s. The fact that Adams only
completed two of the novels and appears to have abandoned The Salmon of
Doubt at some stage in the mid-1990’s is perhaps indicative of the
limited success which he enjoyed with his new character and suggests that
as Adams matured as an author, he found the Dirk Gently world a more
congenial home for his observations than the Hitch-Hiker universe.
I first read Dirk Gently’s Holistic Detective Agency
in the late 1980’s when it first came out- in fact, if I have a dig
around in my parents’ attic, I may even find it’s a first edition hardback
as I persuaded my grandmother to buy it for me as a present for some
occasion or other. As a teenage Who fan, I was of course more interested
in what Adams made of the elements of ‘City of Death’ and ‘Shada’ which he
cobbled together to provide a framework for the novel, and I do remember
feeling rather disappointed in the outcome. At the time, very few people
had seen the surviving footage from ‘Shada’, so working out what had been
cannibalised from Adams’s script was somewhat hit and miss- in fact, as
later video and CD releases have made clear, the main recycled elements
are Professor Chronotis and his time-travelling rooms at St Cedd’s College
in Cambridge. The character scenes with Chronotis and Adams’s reader
identification figure Richard MacDuff (who is given most of the lines
spoken by Chris Parsons in ‘Shada’) are one of the highlights of the
novel, and it’s clear that Adams enjoyed creating the Professor and
writing his dialogue. Adams also re-uses the climax of ‘City of Death’ to
wrap up the novel, complementing his use of Coleridge’s ‘Rime of the
Ancient Mariner’ as a leitmotif, and the concept of life on Earth being
triggered by the explosion of an alien spacecraft is equally effective
here as it was in Doctor Who in 1979. The other elements are,
perhaps, a little more uneven- the Electric Monk is a clever idea, but
fades out of the plot having served its purpose, and the torment suffered
by the ghost of Gordon Way feels out of place. Most unfortunate of all is
the way in which Adams clearly wrote sections of the novel in a surge of
enthusiasm for mid-to-late-1980’s technology- carphones, answering
machines and cutting-edge computers which can model problems in three
dimensions and convert numbers into music. It’s difficult therefore not to
look at this aspect with the same distaste and mocking hindsight that we
reserve for library footage of 1980’s yuppies with mobile phones the size
of a house brick. As an exercise in re-using material which was too good
to go to waste, Dirk Gently’s Holistic Detective Agency is
ultimately an enjoyable end project- it’s just that the linking material
isn’t up to the same standard.
I came to The Long Dark Teatime of the Soul
completely fresh- having been discouraged by the first Dirk Gently novel
(and the fact that Adams did a signing in Liverpool shortly after my
grandmother bought me a copy of the hardback) I didn’t feel encouraged to
continue with the next one. The basic situation is, for want of a better
word, Pythonesque- that, having ceased to be worshipped in the manner to
which he has become accustomed, the Norse god Odin has sold out to a
yuppie couple in return for comfortable treatment in a private hospital
for the rest of his days. This creates some amusing situations when the
god Thor attempts to acclimatise to life in the 1980’s, however it also
leads to a muddled and unsatisfactory conclusion, as the conflict between
Thor and Odin is resolved offstage and the promised confrontation never
really happens. Instead, we have a series of elaborately constructed digs
at the workings of the music industry and other media, lawyers and the
advertising industry- probably cutting edge or at least reasonably sharp
in 1988, but rather old hat in 2003. It’s hard to escape the conclusion
that the reason why this particular part of the Adams oeuvre tends to be
overlooked is that it’s a deeply unsatisfactory read- by this stage, Adams
appears to have been constructing his novels by putting a series of ideas
and situations together in the first half and then tying it all together
in the second half so the novel at least has a beginning, middle and end.
It’s a technique suited to constructing a four-part Doctor Who
serial, but in a humorous novel it tends to lead to a second half bulked
out with jokes and situations designed to keep things going until the end
once Adams had used all the clever ideas.
To return for a moment to M.J. Simpson’s biography of
Adams, he describes the publication of the existing chapters of The
Salmon of Doubt as "a sad and unnecessary inclusion in a book which
some consider to have been rushed out with unseemly haste". Given that
Adams had frequently mentioned Salmon in interviews as a work in
progress for several years, and publication dates were occasionally
pencilled in on optimistic publishers’ schedules from the mid-1990’s
onwards, Simpson’s statement overlooks the fact that material from the
work in progress was known to exist and many of Adams’s readers were keen
to see the chapters which Adams had written made public after his death as
a suitable tribute. In fact, the Salmon collection is a useful
anthology of Adams’s occasional writings and interviews for the reader
interested in Adams himself as well as his fiction and, given that he left
a widow and daughter, also reads to an extent as a combined tribute and
benefit from the publishing industry. What actually exists are ten
chapters which may or may not constitute the opening of a third Dirk
Gently novel- there are occasional shifts in authorial perspective which
may indicate that Adams intended a revision at some point or simply wrote
the most interesting bits first and intended to fill the rest in later.
Regrettably, the chapters which Adams wrote before shelving the work are
some of the best writing in the Dirk Gently series, as if he had a much
stronger conception of Dirk as a character by this stage. In the earlier
novels, Gently is often enigmatic and inscrutable (perhaps inevitable
given that in the first novel he has to fulfil some of the role intended
for Tom Baker’s Doctor in ‘Shada’), but we now do have access to Gently’s
thought processes rather than seeing him through an intermediary character
and Adams simply seems to be more at ease writing character scenes for
him. The fact that Salmon begins not long after the events of the
previous novel also allows Adams to include some explanations which he
perhaps felt were lacking, such as the nature of the eagle. All in all,
what exists in a publishable form gives the impression of a novel with
something of the exuberance of the Hitch-Hiker universe which had been
sadly missing up to this point. It’s debatable whether Adams would ever
have completed the story, as he is on record as saying that he had become
bored with it and it appears to have been shelved if not abandoned circa
1995-6. Given that it was clearly not a preoccupation in the following six
years leading up to his death, and that the Salmon title then
became Adams’s generic title for any work in progress, it may be that it
would have been consigned to his notebooks- in which case the existence of
what survives is due in the main to his death at the age of 49.
The Dirk Gently novels are an overlooked part of Adams’s
output mainly because they simply lack the expansiveness and sense of fun
of the Hitch-Hiker novels with which Adams made his name and fortune. What
is however interesting is that from the circumstances of the writing of
the first novel and the circumstances of the publication of a fragment of
the third, we have a much better understanding of Adams’s working methods
and ingenuity as a writer than we do from the trilogy in five parts.
During his life, Adams frequently commented on the number of projects with
which he was involved at any one time, and it is to be regretted that the
promise shown by the early chapters of The Salmon of Doubt will
remain just that and that Dirk Gently will be forever stuck in New Mexico
in the company of a rhinoceros handler and his charge.